Friday, August 24, 2007

Artifacts (draft 2, edits by bluemask)

I have been away all day
and in the hours
that approach the end of light
I wander
spots that touch or speak
where spools of laughter
have tumbled to each corner now dark with the setting sun
and in the shadows dim refuge
I travel from room to room
and collect
admist
the dregs floating
in coffee cups
in this
I
sink
without a doubt
that tonight,
tonight
leads into a pupa quiet
cocoon
these small tragedies

5 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:18 a.m.

    Geezuz.

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  2. what? it's not even really about me (or a man, for once)
    ;)

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  3. I wander
    I
    sink
    without a doubt
    that tonight
    tonight
    leads into a pupa quiet
    cocoon
    these small tragedies

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  4. ah. nice re-arrangement.

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  5. I like it bluemask

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