Friday, September 26, 2008

chasm

 




















across the in-between,

build a bridge

above the unforeseen,

recognize the cloudlit sun

the sunless day

the moonless sleep

loneliness within company

friends within enemies

betrayal without violence

a fair trade, a good price;

exchange and yet -

do not leave anything behind.
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8 comments:

  1. There's a Wall-Mart in Terrace.

    Terrace just started recycling, and found a company was burning stuff and charging recycling fees.

    I wonder if any of the trees around here were planted by someone I know.

    (Random thoughts after reading your poem).

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  2. Anonymous9:22 a.m.

    This is such a good poem, not b/c I like the poem itself, but b/c the ideas that it tackles are so interesting and fundamental to any outcome of the world.

    There is a balance that this poem touches, the holy balance, or the inevitable balance.

    What's going on with you Sky, very sage, but very rage.

    Heh.

    Maybe not, I mean the rage part, but it sounded good.

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  3. Anonymous9:23 a.m.

    And just to be sure, the poem is awesome.

    Sorry poem if I didn't sound constructive.

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  4. Anonymous10:05 a.m.

    That's a great photo, it makes me think of some of Bill Eakin's pics.

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  5. This poem is about relationships, I think. 10 years together ought to teach you something!

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  6. Anonymous4:31 p.m.

    c-dog: your input is duly noted.

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  7. Anonymous10:38 p.m.

    cyan has got the touch! i like the words too

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