Friday, September 22, 2006

Fall Love

Fall love
autumn me
feel like
falling
crisp
air burns cheek
of memory blush
lost
chance
of last
chance

the trees
huddled naked together
all alone
remind me
I want to

my arms
one
with their leaves
falling tears
wind whimsy
exposing
fools
raking up the mess
wind whistling
around them

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Intense.

Good stuff.

J C said...

I love fall. I was reading this text in browns and oranges and reds and warm yellows.

Ryan K said...

I like this, meloncholy but romantic all the same. Feels like I'm cozied up to a fire with a lover after a walk through the woods laughing, teasing and drinking a bottle of cheap red wine under a blanket, while cold winds shake the window pane.