The last stanze really interests me. Long enough for what I wondered? For change I imagined.
The first papragraph reads smoothly for me until touch, it might be just the sound of the word, or its 'touch singing', but maybe because it bugs me, its good. They say writers should remove everything in the work that sounds good. What does one do?
I really like the 'I think, I don't, I can. Repeated that to myself a few times. It sounds like a train, but with more decision available to the train, not just getting over the hill. Whoa. Slow down on the comparisons Culleton, you're making me dizzy!
I picked up this great time life book called 'The Mind'. One dollar. There's one there on Reptiles too. Should I pick it up? It has great images in it.
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this one stands out for me
The last stanze really interests me. Long enough for what I wondered? For change I imagined.
The first papragraph reads smoothly for me until touch, it might be just the sound of the word, or its 'touch singing', but maybe because it bugs me, its good. They say writers should remove everything in the work that sounds good. What does one do?
I really like the 'I think, I don't, I can. Repeated that to myself a few times. It sounds like a train, but with more decision available to the train, not just getting over the hill. Whoa. Slow down on the comparisons Culleton, you're making me dizzy!
I picked up this great time life book called 'The Mind'. One dollar. There's one there on Reptiles too. Should I pick it up? It has great images in it.
Do it!
Pick it up!
cant hold to the fire long enough like andrews detrimental memes.
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