Tuesday, June 07, 2005

So you wanted old school...

ABOVE THE ARCTIC CIRCLE

flying with two Inuks
high above the Arctic circle

we played cards
speaking not saying much

glances and smiles
were all we understood

there's no need to deal in order
that is the order of things here

the role of cards
and of smiled glances

in a place like this

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Good, good. I'd say one of the best yet. I think you're stronger when you rely more on your imagination and less on your vocabulary. But I'm not sure what 'smiled glances' are?