Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Revealed Love

The ship
is back in
my mind

and

it cannot reveal
the words
that don't
understand

The fire
that won't
sing

3 comments:

Quitmoanez said...

That's right!

:)

D.Macri said...

This is definately one of my favorites. It also reminds me of Andrew's "let your sails unfurl"
as well as Denis P's "Reve" in our July entries. Oh ya James has a ship too. I have been thinking of doing a ship painting for quite sometime, and this helps me inch even closer to it. Beautiful metaphors, the words might not understand but the rest of us doeas.

J C said...

A ship's safe in harbour, but that's not what ships are for was my grade twelve yearbook quote.