Sitting, he found the love for a moment. Smiling, the people blackened the sky. Waiting, the change sits on the dresser that like him, fell into a drawer.
I like this one alot. My structuralist brain churns.... I believe that the piece would command suspence by separating the verb from the object. See below.
Sitting,he found the love for a moment. Smiling, the people blackened the sky. Waiting, the change sits on the dresser that like him, fell into a drawer.
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3 comments:
Quick douse him with water!
=)
Nice narrative.
I like this one alot. My structuralist brain churns.... I believe that the piece would command suspence by separating the verb from the object. See below.
Sitting,he found
the love for a moment.
Smiling, the people
blackened the sky.
Waiting, the change
sits on the dresser
that like him,
fell
into a drawer.
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