Monday, June 05, 2006

what...

...makes you go on
and
not on
target not
on
track not
on anything other
than
toxins and things like
that

that
make you
make
things make
less sense non
sensical and
not going not
going on
going
gone.

8 comments:

cara said...

Nice rythmn...

Lorne Roberts said...

thanks! for about two years or so, i kept a journal every day in metre and rhyme. i still venture back into it sometimes.

this piece is better out loud, i think, than on the page.

cara said...

Label should do a poetry night?

Lorne Roberts said...

this thursday, starting at 7.

cara said...

Awesome.

Anonymous said...

This is truly a poem about life.

_Q_ said...

Wise man once said...
"just giver'"

D.Macri said...

or another who said...
"go big or go home"