...makes you go on
and
not on
target not
on
track not
on anything other
than
toxins and things like
that
that
make you
make
things make
less sense non
sensical and
not going not
going on
going
gone.
Monday, June 05, 2006
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Nice rythmn...
thanks! for about two years or so, i kept a journal every day in metre and rhyme. i still venture back into it sometimes.
this piece is better out loud, i think, than on the page.
Label should do a poetry night?
this thursday, starting at 7.
Awesome.
This is truly a poem about life.
Wise man once said...
"just giver'"
or another who said...
"go big or go home"
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