Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Material reality

Ideas that eat
while the three of you
sing

Held hard at once
grasping the air
and the alloy dissolves

You are one among
two squeezing releasing
a double-edged pin
going right around through

4 comments:

cara said...

nice.

stop with me this night and i will show you the meaning of all poems said...

this makes me think of a photograph of three drunk people at a party.

stop with... said...

and i like it.

plischk said...

i've been lazy with the commenting, but i've been reading all your poems lately and loving them. i think you're about to have a breakthrough that may result in channelling leonard cohen!