Tuesday, October 18, 2005

Untitled 29

momentous
gestures
create
the ill-fated
assurance
of strict
command
but how
can I
be sure
when you
give cold
lust

3 comments:

J C said...

commentless
writings
create
utter
sadness
how can he
be sure
that he
doesn't
suck ass

(more tittering)

D.Macri said...

What the heck is tittering ?

This comment is vague, even mock poetic maybe. It makes me question your intentions, are you being nice or mean?

J C said...

a gentle laugh or giggle. might even be english..where's the dictionary? To laugh in a low restrained way, , as from nervousness or ill surpressed amusement.

then there's a gaffaw, which isn't in my dictionary. or to gaff, which is loud rude talk, a loud rude laugh.

What the heck is heck, anyways? (tee hee) I checked, and it looks like it has something to do with heckling, badgering or tormenting, so heck must be a place of badgering or torment.

Carlos, you know you don't suck ass. I love your poetry.

But...are you ever filled with the doubt that maybe your poetry does suck ass? I am, all the time. Self doubt.

My poem reflects that.