Tuesday, April 25, 2006

WalkingLivingPrairie

Thus he awoke of the walking prairie
and the land that never dies
for in his intuition gave length
the generous and feeling
none will never never, never ever

There, on the horizon like
mantle generous and feeling
awoke the intuitional sweet
long the length of walking
in between the grasses ever
never will they always be, always this

Never ever, never never;
they felt good brushing on the inside of his hands

7 comments:

Quitmoanez said...

I'm trying hard to change the ways of my effort. This was a first step.

:)

cara said...

Serene and wistful.

I can hear the noise of grass, which only a prairie person can truly appreciate or understand I think.

It's totally beautiful
:)

But dude, that Squirrel abomination has gotta go, seriously

J C said...

I really liked the never ever being repeated in that way.

Great piece (of course it needs work, what doesn't these days).

D.Macri said...

In art school, one of the favorite "stumpping" questions asked by profs was..."but is it finnished"?

I was comended on my response, which I used in nearly every class. I would always say "this is a potential stage of completion". This gave me the option (which I think should ultimately be up to the artist). Sometimes it isn't finished, and I feel compelled to go back, other times, it is finnished enough for me to move on to the next exciting problem.

I liked how James liked the same part that Shanon didn't. This really exemplifies the effect of personal preferences. It's like the Komar and Melamid deal again, where everything is for somebody, but not nothing is for everybody. We each have to decide what is good and bad in our own and others work, but in the ideals of art-reinforcement, we should mainly focus on what we like, afterall (see Jesse's critique finding on the melee site) creative authority is a tricky buisness.

D.Macri said...

http://www.diacenter.org/km/

J C said...

well said macro, well said...my thought exactly

cara said...

Hey was the animation link always there?

I agree that creative authority is a tricky business, maybe the whole focus on "good" and "bad" is a tricky business too, I mean what is the purpose of that anyways?