Friday, January 11, 2008

Fog ii

No demons left to escape
here in the darkness awake
but what spark of light is this
draws burning venomous kiss

formless shadows play to dance
as distant peaks begin to ring
see there red spot on hands
reawaken ruin they can bring

distance banish thee from sight
cast the very stars from the night
speak none. hear none. see no.
No, not what i have done

Fear is not beyond thee imagination
but precision exacted on the reality

3 comments:

Lorne Roberts said...

foggy eye?

fog eye eye?

speak none, hear none. see no.

great line(s).

cara said...

prophetic...sounds like what I imagine the oracles to have spoken like in ancient times.


I especially like "but what spark of light in this draws burning venomous kiss".

_Q_ said...

Fog iii has already been written. Needs some edits sbefore i can post it. I wanted a series that felt like it was awakening. I came up a little too sharp already on this one. So... Fog 3 is going to take some time to master. I should have postponed the move from dreams to reality. Now i've got to figure what language suits an awakened sense, sharp but still nostalgic of it's misty dreaming beginings.