Sunday, October 22, 2006

threads

I was dreaming a place:
to familiar it with visits
and tap warm lullaby
one by one.
I was anticipating:
the missing element
etched in a frozen
sky. Companion
could we moment this?

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Super superGood.

Lorne Roberts said...

i love the 2nd line.

D. Sky Onosson said...

Those are some nice uses of what, in linguistic terminology is called 'conversion' or 'zero-derivation', which in English allows you to take a noun and use it as a verb without any special modification (no suffixes attached to the end etc.) Some 'grammar police' don't like this kind of thing, but who cares?

Keep on languaging!