Friday, February 08, 2008

Extension on poetry homework?

When your feet
are dragging on the pavement
and your rattling kettle
whistles
boils over
with hot
harrowed
liquid
steam

Jump on the mole-skin saddle
of your red haired steed
and ride the mother ship west
up to the gossamer sinewy yonder
wheels turning
dinner's burning

Oh please murmur
sweet nothings
to me

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ahem.

Anonymous said...

that poem is just plain lewd

TheBlueMask said...

a lil' hot around me collar

cara said...

a playful word romp.

Great finale!

Lorne Roberts said...

heh heh.

you think THAT's lewd? i was recently listening to this captain goldstar chap-- he has a line where he sings...

"she's so full of herself
i have to fill her up
with what's
inside of me."

now THAT's lewd. hee hee.

very good poem. sexy.