Friday, December 28, 2007

remains

your voice already echoes
even though we still share this geography
I can still imagine the window you look out ;
how the headlights and street lamps make golden
ice on the ox bow street
and the river that snakes behind
where you work.

the comfort of this conversation:
its landmarks and passage ways
familiar with visits


your new streets (with past names)
will have windows and streetlamps,
landmarks and passage ways
that I hope you'll picture for us
so we might imagine the window you look out:
how the head lights and street lamps make golden
where you work.

5 comments:

Lorne Roberts said...

heh. very nice, thx.

i think that's now the second poem that's ever been written about me in all of history.

score:

cara: 2
rest of the world: 0

Anonymous said...

(why does wolfboy think that everything is about him?)

cara said...
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cara said...

okay, terrible typos in the last comment (can I edit comments?)

Anyways...this poem was ispired by my dear friend wolfboy, but it is also written in tribute to the many friends and family who have left/or are planning to leave.

It is also written for those of us who remain.

Lorne Roberts said...

ha, ha. those of us who remain. nice.