Friday, December 07, 2007

Wolsely (part 1)

you creaking, falling down palace

you snow elegance

you patchouli nose jewel

you enchant garbage fairies on bicycle

you river gardens

you plastered poster child

you swing between both sides



you smell of fresh bread rotting fruit

you derelict fence

you welcome veranda

you sweet yellow, screaming marigold curbside

you quiet us in vestibule


you shiver

you crumble in sunlight

14 comments:

Lorne Roberts said...

isn't it wolseley? maybe not.

anyway, this is excellent in its excellentness. and after our convo this a.m., i spent the day ordering transcripts, securing letters of ref, filling out online applications, writing statements of purpose, etc.

i've officially applied for concordia next summer! horray!

edits to come soon, though i feel a bit stumped right now. :)

Lorne Roberts said...

stumped?

stumpted?

no matter how i write that word, it looks wrong.

Anonymous said...

you hydroponic grow op

Anonymous said...

Do you know where you're going to live in Montreal. Hopefully not NDG, I am anti NDG, but if you are then I won't hold it against you. ;)

cara said...

oops, I think it is wolsely...correction to follow.

hey Anita, what is NDG?

cara said...

man, I can't spell that word right.
Wolseley, corrections to follow this correction.

I'm glad you applied, you shine wolfboy.
:)

Anonymous said...

Oh NDG (Notre Dame d Grace) is an area in Montreal that for me is too far to go to ever. Nothing to do with this poem, which is beautiful and stellar as always Cara.

Smells are often the best intuitive description of a place. Ever go somewhere you've never been before but the smell seems familiar? I've been told that your memory centre in your brain is right next to the smell centre. That's why smells can conjure up the most vivid of memories.

Lorne Roberts said...

totally. a more vivid memory than sound or sight ever, to be sure.

i'm living right downtown, on maisonneuve, close to uqam and the main subway station.

montreal is a big geographical mystery to me, frankly. i know almost nothing about it.

Anonymous said...

Hey Wolfster, what made you decide to move to Montreal?

Anonymous said...

NDG is also the area that has the most anglophones and also where the student ghetto is.
And wolfie, please tell me that you didn't decide to goto concordia the same day that you finished and started your application. Although maybe you're just taking a summer class?

Smells? Like how River hieghts smells like aphid poop in the summer. Or when you drive down Marion it smells like bacon(or worse, like dead rotten bacon)

If I was to do Montreal all over again I would either live on Dorion(again), somewhere in the plateau(if I could afford it), or in Denis' favorite area next to Welinski's(the name escapes me).

Lorne Roberts said...

montreal came about as a choice b/c i wanted to move to europe, but couldn't afford it just yet, so mtl seemed like the next best thing.

also, it came about b/c winnipeg is sort of like the mushroom inside those poor little insect's heads to me right now.

Anonymous said...

sounds like you might be in the gay village. xo

cara said...

smell is often the most vivid memory I have about a place, a time or a person...Anita, interesting that smell and memory are so close together in the brain, but that makes perfect sense based on my experience.

I have been to strange places made familiar with scent.

Anonymous said...

JC it sounds like you've been smelling some bad smells lately. Maybe you should put some potpourri around your house or something.