Monday, February 05, 2007

.. I don't know about this one.

Cup Craft

Patiently awaiting, moving around
Forgetn' where as much unseen
quietly forceful quick, sounds
losing where I am being

sideways walking scorpions sting
Endurance as spell virtue unsettling
Upside down the prism sees
Caught me down on bended knee

Not so much in measuring
the differance within between
everything and of magnificence
still know nothing of everything

Faded in a wisp of smoke
circling my coffee cup.

2 comments:

Quitmoanez said...

Stop smoking cigarettes, they're bad for you.

And I like this very much, especially the back and forth between ideas/feelings/words.

And as many have commented on my work, editing is key.

:)

cara said...

I like the line "sideways walking scorpions sting" and the last two lines.

Definately moving between worlds in this one.
Always something hidden.