Monday, September 24, 2007

Being & Time

It goes
twirl-lily-dew

Gone
illusory-boo

You are
undividedly-you

Still and
fleshily-mused

4 comments:

Quitmoanez said...

Practice practice practice...

cara said...

I really like this.

"still and fleshily-mused"

very cool.

TheBlueMask said...

I digs it

Lorne Roberts said...

man, you got some serious problems.

heh. just kidding buddy. well... sort of.


but, yeah... practice practice practice. i like this better than the previous attempts in this particular style. very rhthymic w/out the rhythm dominating how you read it/think it.

you are undividedly-you. great line.